Thursday, March 13, 2008

....

And you invade my soul again.
How do you do it?
Everytime.

You echo my thoughts like a pensieve.
Hold them like glistening silver smoke,
turn them over at will.
And hold them out for display.

But you are not supposed to.
Then why do you do it?
How do you do it?

I, like a drop of rain,
on a dry window pane,
watch the sun kill me.
Yet, you make me live.

Can you for once, give me your essence.
Unwrap it from the gold foil,
and give yourself up to me.
Vulnerable, weak.
I'll give you love.

6 comments:

Cinderella said...

Good lord...you're speakin' straight outta my heart !!

This is just beautiful..

**Can you for once, give me your essence.
Unwrap it from the gold foil,
and give yourself up to me.
Vulnerable, weak.
I'll give you love.**

Amazing...the serene spell you weave, even when, what you wanna do is, grab hold of her hand and make her listen to you...

Looks like I've found a poetry soulmate !!

The Mad Girl said...

I don't like it much, frankly!

the pheonix rises said...

I say,you are a royal youknowwhat.no wonder then....

the basu said...

@cindrella:hihi..I dont think I'm that good,or any good for that matter :P I'm flattered anyways,thankee for the nice,nice words :)
@mg:what,the idea??I knew you won't,I knew you won't..n you dint keep yer promise either :(
@sneha:what be this youknowwhat?I'm not sure.:P

The Mad Girl said...

what promise? explain!!!!!!!

the basu said...

you promised to edit me's posts...but you dont! :(