Monday, November 10, 2008


Walking in the woods with my shadow at my heels
the air smelled of smoke and of blood-stained steel;
the trees came down and the birds, they cried-
My shadow said: “Hide.”

Walking in the desert with my shadow at my side
the desert was empty and the desert was wide,
I was burning to death in the midday sun-
My shadow said: “Run.” 

Cold water flowing in the old grey river
I was a captive, from a slave’s chain delivered,
when I fell down to rest on the river’s brink
My shadow said: “Drink.”

The table in the tower has a cloth so white
like a sheet for the winding of a corpse at night,
plenty of bread but there wasn’t no meat-
My shadow said: “Eat.”

The sun went down and the air was cold
the loneliness tried to kill my soul
couldn’t find my shadow and I started to weep but
My shadow murmured: “Sleep.”

Then I built me a fire and it made me warm,
watching it burn in the heart of the storm I
slept in the light of the smouldering embers as
My shadow serenaded: “Remember.”


i wish i was good enough to illustrate what I wrote. btw all credits to deviantart.com :(

3 comments:

Unknown said...

are waah...tune aisa kuch likha jo samaj me aata hai!!!!now give me treat for regularly visitin ur blogplace :P

The Mad Girl said...

You know what, you found your calling.*wideeyedinappreciation*

the pheonix rises said...

ei i have a hunch...somebody's watching u right?na?