You see her, quiet as a cat,
curled into herself;
Eyes soft
like feline paws
closed and clawless ; keeping
her breast from shivering.
Nothing emanates.
Not even sadness-
It is then, that you realize, with
wonder, and a funny disgust
that certain people learn
to cry so bloody silently.
p.s: life's a all about coming to terms with reality; or so it seems. And about understanding people who are intimate..aarghh!
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8 months ago
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That was very well-written!
Keep it up :)
I cry like that.
My mom says even as a child I'd weep ever so without as much as as a sound.
Beautiful poetry !
now now i hope this is impersonal...you alright?
you don't see the obvious do you? :P
all your posts are like real painful to get through...dunno how anybody sits through them :D
kya be abhi khush??I thrive in anonymity to avoid the ignominy of commenting here..:)
no seriously kya thoughts hai be....chupa rustam nikla be tu!!!
Hey you are becoming a poet!!!
nice!!
hi
so young to write all this. have u tasted life so or is it the heart of a poet that wanders into unknown realms?
@sameera:I'll try to..thank s a lot :)
@cinderella: Didn't aunty tell you that weeping silently is not good?one can choke you know :P
thanku!
@sneha: who knows! :( sobai-i to kannakati kore
@anonymous: abe saale I didn't ask for critical appreciation-tu puch raha tha kya likhta rehata hai bekar mein so I gave u da link :)I don't think u got nething :D
@mg:eh?see when one writes a poem one becomes a poet..n i be doin that for long :( :D flattered.
@jyotsana: well,a bit of both to be true..n hey I'm an adult now,I've got a taste of it for sure :)
Mewo! Thodi mithi thodi catty! Shedding tears silently is one of the toughest things in life! But u have to be really strong to do so!
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