It's never been easy for me
to find words to flow on without monotony
but this time as I strive to reinvent
lord! forgive da few awkward lines
the velvetty touch in da chilly air
the endearing warmth in the scornful touches
of the sun seem all so pronounced today..
as a band of merrymaking parrots
present a pictureseque baroque against the
perfect blue sky,it could have been a dreamtheatre
as cognitive thoughts give way to fantasizing
unbridled; my mind pauses to reflect..
since I met you my whole life has changed
it's not just plaintive dreams that u have transformed
I was tired,living in the past
but somehow you've brought me back
And I haven't felt like this since before adolescense
And now that I'm sure that this time
I've turned a weary leaf or two
I hold my hand out to you
I might not feel like the safest place
but all i'm asking you is don't write me off
just yet...
for years I've been tellin myself the same old story
fondling and caressing the dreams of a passionate heart
you are solution to all ridles of my life
the fragrance that engulfs my senses
you've given me a reason to take another chance
now I need you cuz u kill all my pains
I know that I may have blown away chances
more than anyone can ever get
all I wanna say is don't rub me off
don't write me off
just yet...
i urge readers to consider themselves lucky to be able to gain access to the chronicles of an absolutely crazy guy
:)
to find words to flow on without monotony
but this time as I strive to reinvent
lord! forgive da few awkward lines
the velvetty touch in da chilly air
the endearing warmth in the scornful touches
of the sun seem all so pronounced today..
as a band of merrymaking parrots
present a pictureseque baroque against the
perfect blue sky,it could have been a dreamtheatre
as cognitive thoughts give way to fantasizing
unbridled; my mind pauses to reflect..
since I met you my whole life has changed
it's not just plaintive dreams that u have transformed
I was tired,living in the past
but somehow you've brought me back
And I haven't felt like this since before adolescense
And now that I'm sure that this time
I've turned a weary leaf or two
I hold my hand out to you
I might not feel like the safest place
but all i'm asking you is don't write me off
just yet...
for years I've been tellin myself the same old story
fondling and caressing the dreams of a passionate heart
you are solution to all ridles of my life
the fragrance that engulfs my senses
you've given me a reason to take another chance
now I need you cuz u kill all my pains
I know that I may have blown away chances
more than anyone can ever get
all I wanna say is don't rub me off
don't write me off
just yet...
i urge readers to consider themselves lucky to be able to gain access to the chronicles of an absolutely crazy guy
:)
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11 comments:
You can definitely do better! But keep writing continuously, consistently.
nice! :)
and nice! :D very nice.... :D
word of advice, use proper English, this is not an IM chat, bro!
and write more, many more!
Arree waah! Mamu ka naya blog??? :D Congo n keep writing! :) Well, I object with Indra. It's ur blog where u put ur heart out, so write proper language of ur heart n soul. This is not english test right? Btw, why Preity's eyes???
basuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu......
so finally into blogging!!!
good to c u hear!!!
are chooo chorryy.. spelling mistake ho gaya..
*here!!
:) :)
bapak likhechis to....waise original photo ta dile partis to......neways keep writin..u r great
come on mg i know myself better :)
@indranil thanks bro me has corrected
@cheetama thanks! cuz they have the same searching element as....hihi
@sundae hey please i've corrected my mistakes man,well i think i have
@pradeep thankee mate, i know what i am. hehe. and you wud be better if you dont be shy. :)
desperation eh???
moteina
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